1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?
The comments others have posted on my blog helped me write paragraph more interesting and less wrong. First, they tell me about how could I write more interesting topic sentence, and they advise me to how shoud I add supporting sentences. It is good to know various opinion of others. Second, they correct my mistakes such as capitalization, spelling, etc. They help me catch my mistakes that wasn't recognized while I only concentrate on paragraph structure.
2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?
My comments gave many good effect to my writing. First, they provided opportunities for review my paragraph to me. I could correct my paragraph when I advuse on other blogs. Second, they allowed me to think about various topic and perspective. By commenting other's paragraph, I read more detail their writing, and I can empathize their writing or raise a questions about their supporting sentences.
Hi Wonsik!
답글삭제Your answers about the question have two reasons, and it is good to see the paragraph easily. The teachings you wrote are almost same with me. I think comments gave me opportunity to revise some wrong sentnces too. Reading your paragraph, i felt there are lof of same thing about this answer.
Then, have a nice day Wonsik :)